The Space Between

In a city where the sea whispered secrets to stones and local trains hummed like restless dreams, lived two strangers—bound not by fate, but by a series of delicate, echoing coincidences.

Nikhil woke every morning at exactly 6:47 a.m.—not because his phone buzzed, but because a koel sang outside his window with stubborn punctuality. Across the city, Aditi stirred at the same time. Her alarm had long since stopped working, but a sliver of light always cut through her curtains just right, as though the sun remembered her better than she remembered herself.

They brushed their teeth to the same vintage Bollywood station. Nikhil liked the gravelly melancholy of old songs—how they felt like letters unsent. Aditi didn’t know all the words, but she hummed as if the music had been left in her veins by someone who once loved her in silence.

Nikhil worked in a second-hand bookshop near Matunga, a sleepy little place hidden between a tea stall and a forgotten tailoring shop. Aditi walked past it every morning on her way to a flower stall in Dadar, where she crafted arrangements like small, fragrant stories—gajras, mogra, lilies wrapped in whispers. She never looked inside, never knowing that behind the dusty glass, Nikhil was organizing novels by feeling, not alphabet, and glancing at the door whenever the bells twinkled.

They both loved the rain, but for different reasons.

Nikhil loved how it made the city blur at the edges, how even traffic lights seemed softer, more forgiving. Aditi loved how the rain made strangers share rickshaws and lovers pause in doorways. Neither knew that, on those grey Mumbai afternoons, they sometimes stood across from each other at the same zebra crossing, both holding umbrellas—his a plain navy blue, hers with tiny golden birds painted by hand.

They both had a habit of writing to a nothing, a no one. .

Nikhil scribbled thoughts in the margins of unsold books—things like, “Somewhere, someone must be feeling this same quiet ache.” Aditi wrote on scraps of flower wrapping—tucked inside bouquets as if someone, someday, might find them: “Do you ever feel like you’re just one turn away from meeting someone your heart already knows?”

They moved through the city like parallel verses in a poem, near but never touching. When Nikhil sipped cutting chai on the steps of a library in Fort, watching the sky darken, Aditi was sketching a flower in a quiet café in Bandra, pausing as if she’d forgotten what she was waiting for.

On Sundays, they both went to Shivaji Park.

He with a book, she with a sketchpad. Once, a gust of wind carried her page down the path, fluttering to a halt near Nikhil’s foot. But he didn’t see. His gaze was fixed on a line of poetry that curled around his thoughts like smoke.

So many almosts.

Almost passing each other at the Kala Ghoda Art Festival, where Nikhil left minutes before Aditi arrived.

Almost reaching for the same samosa at an Irani café counter.

Almost brushing shoulders at Churchgate station during rush hour, where hearts beat louder than the trains.

They never met.

Not yet.

But in a city stitched together by noise and yearning, they felt each other. Like twin sitar strings vibrating in symphony, like reflections glimpsed in a window just as the train pulls away.

At night, they dreamed of the same bench near the sea, under the old banyan tree with its fairy lights tangled in the roots. And in those dreams, someone sat beside them. Someone whose silence felt like known.

They both woke with a name they’d never heard still lingering on their lips. A name that felt like a memory from a life unlived.

In a city of sixteen million, their stories were already whispering to each other in the spaces between raindrops and song lyrics. Woven in the same thread, just waiting for the right breeze.

And maybe—just maybe—tomorrow, it will carry them to the same place.

At the same time.

And this time, they’ll look up.

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Hi this is me, Pratik. I love to read, write, listen to music, watch movies, travel and enjoy great food. Like a whole lot of us I guess. Will keep posting my short stories and other writings out here on a regular basis (hopefully) and (hopefully again) all of you will enjoy them writings...

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